nice piece of background music
The name suits track quite well! :) But i just have to say that some parts of it can be improved. In my opnion, the bells at 02:30-02:47 are a bit out of key sometimes. And
drums/percussion need more work with velocities, dynamics - they're too straight in most of your tracks and it sucks life out of them.
But it's nice track overall. :) 4/5 and 8/10.
I made most of the song in a day and then left it alone for almost 3 months. It wasn't until I forced myself to finish the track (I got stuck around the change) that I realized it needed to be re-worked. I don't post anything final up on NG. Everything is rough drafts and unfinished projects as to protect my music since I always end up wanting to sell most tracks anyway. This is the unmixed, second draft. Thanks for your review though.
interesting
I think you should try playing arpedgios with strings sections - pizzicato and spicatto - and oboe/flute duel for solo parts. You got the mood right, but the result is indeed kinda weird (it may be because of timbre of the guitar. :)
yeah, a re-arrange of instruments like the one you mention sounds about right... I'll really consider it for a future release, although not soon I guess :)... got more projects on hold.
Thanks a lot for your comments, I appreciate them.
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The track has a good mood, but it's just asking for a bit more complex arrangement (1st part especially).
I really liked the atmosphere though, maybe you'll make a cover some time later with adding additional stuff to the music. :)
make your mix clearer
Bass drum is too muffled. I'd like it to be cleaner, more punchy.
The track overall is not bad, interesting and positive in some way.
the music has energy, but it needs more
The sound is clear, nice mix. But i'd like it to have something like main theme or more complex arrangement.
yeah i will try and make a main riff/melody in my next song
Also known as Silent Owl.
Age 43, Male
Sound designer
Cyprus
Joined on 9/29/08
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